LA 10 Journals



8/28/17

more detail like what is Brian Occonner like, like what is his favorite car or who is his parent and what do they look like. we need to explain how he earns money and what is his story. we also need to know who are his freinds and what is the point of his story. the reason of the story could be like, there was a war or he started being a street racer, and we need to add some humor.