PLAN
Introduction
- Hook
- Explain perseverance
- Include evidence on how perseverance is important
Body 1
- State how perseverance helps people complete hard tasks
- Include how perseverance has helped people reach goals
- Cite evidence + Commentary (Example : This shows people can complete hard tasks with perseverance)
Body 2
- Explain how perseverance helps people become more successful
- Include how perseverance can help people reach their goals of success
- Include someones personal story
- Cite evidence + Commentary ( Example : This proves that (name) reached success with perseverance
Conclusion
- Restate both topics
- Explain what each topic proved
- Restate hook