Peer Reviews

Peer Review

Jerralyn Satrio:

story structure: 4 - establishes plot/setting/character/pt. of view

Characterization: 4- clear description

Ideas: 4 – interesting idea, unpredictable

Designing Organization: 3 – good design

Specififc Assignments Directions: 4 – Fairly meets the given standards

DESCRIPTION: 3 - Have to be more specific on how the situation is and the characterization

Word Choice: 4 – Good wording

Sentance Variety: 3- Brief sentences and easily to be understood.

Voice/Sense of Audience: 4 - evident awareness of choice and audience

GRAMMAR/ Punctuation: 3 - Mostly correct grammar

Spelling and Word usage: 4 - Mostly correct spelling and word usage

Overall assignment presentation: 5 - follow MLA style perfectly

Total Score: 45

Best aspect: The story line is not cliché and it does not feel like reading pages of story.

Further revision: The scenes have to be more detail and deeper characterization.

Fannissa Sukir:

story structure: 3 – good structure, brief but has a broad meaning

Characterization: 4 - detail characterization

Ideas: 4 - Develops ideas creatively

Designing Organization: 3 – good design

Specififc Assignments Directions: 4 – meet standards well

DESCRIPTION: 3 – Have to include more details

Word Choice: 4 – Easily to be understood

Sentance Variety: 4 - good sentence structure

Voice/Sense of Audience: 4 - evident awareness of choice and audience

GRAMMAR/ Punctuation: 4 - Mostly correct grammar

Spelling and Word usage: 3- Moderate spelling and wording

Overall assignment presenation: 5 - follow MLA style perfectly

Total Score: 45

Best aspect: The storyline is great

Further revision: Need to include more details.