Peer Reviews (Roshomon)

Tiffany Nguyen

Story Structure: 4- creates a good and smooth flow of story

Characterization: 3- well explanation of involved characters

Ideas: 3- average 

Designing Organization: 3- well design

Specific Assignments Directions: 4- meets all the requirements

Description: 4- brief but yet clear explanation

Word choice: 3- good wording

Sentence Variety: 3- good variety of words

Voice/ Sense of audience: 3- good awareness of target audience

Grammar/ Puncutuation: 3- good grammar

Spelling and Word Usage: 3-correct spelling and word usage

Overall assignment presentation: 3-good presentation

Total Score: 39

Best Aspect: I like the format of the story

Further Revision: more details

Tyler Sheperd

Story Structure: 4- creates a good and smooth flow of story

Characterization: 4- detail explanation of characters

Ideas: 4- good and creative ideas

Designing Organization: 3- well design

Specific Assignments Directions: 4- meets all the requirements

Description: 5- good and detail description

Word choice: 4- vivid but appealing wording

Sentence Variety: 3- good variety of words

Voice/ Sense of audience: 4- target audience is defined clearly

Grammar/ Puncutuation: 4- mostly correct grammar

Spelling and Word Usage: 3-correct spelling and word usage

Overall assignment presentation: 3-good presentation

Total Score: 42

Best Aspect: Appealing and not boring

Further Revision: Expa

Amira Gregory

Story Structure: 4- appealing structure

Characterization: 3- well explanation of involved characters

Ideas: 3- good idea of story

Designing Organization: 3- good design

Specific Assignments Directions: 3-meets all the requirements but not as exactly

Description: 3- not that detail

Word choice: 3- good wording

Sentence Variety: 3- good variety of words

Voice/ Sense of audience: 3- good awareness of target audience

Grammar/ Puncutuation: 4-mostly correct grammar

Spelling and Word Usage: 4-correct spelling and word usage

Overall assignment presentation: 3-good presentation

Total Score: 42

Best Aspect: Good storyline and catches readers' interest

Further Revision: More details characterization