Cristian Barrera's Peer Reviews
Cristian Barrera"s Peer Review
Name of Whose Work You Are Working On: Julia Yi
Evaluator: Cristian Barrera
Meaning/Content:
Story Structure: 4
-The structure of the story had a nice flow to it after I understood the situation in which they were talking in.
Characterization: 4
-Introduced most of the characters in a clear manner.
Development:
Ideas: 5
- Established the main ideas from the beginning of the story.
Organization:
Designing Organization: 4
-The structure of the essay was good, but I was sort of lost because of the way the characters we're talking.
Specific Assignment Directions: 5
-Followed the directions well.
Language Use:
Description: 4
- The dialogue was written well and established the main ideas.
Word Choice: 5
-The word choice fit well with the story.
Sentence Variety: 4
-The sentence structure was good, sometimes difficult to grasp.
Voice/Sense of Audience: 5
-Having all of those characters interact with each other made the story flow well.
Conventions:
Grammar/Punctuation: 4
-There were some mistakes, but overall it was great
Spelling and Word Usage: 5
-The word usage was a little graphic, but I understand it was part of the story.
Overall Assignment Presentation: 5
-Follow the MLA style and directions well.
TOTAL SCORE: 54
Assessment
-The best aspect of the story is the way it was just a conversation. It made it flow well, and I was really into the story.
-One aspect to work on is just giving a little bit more detail of what is going on in the story.
The grade I would give this assignment is: A
Name of Whose Work You Are Working On: Emily Cordova
Evaluator: Cristian Barrera
Meaning/Content:
Story Structure: 3
-The plot of the story was there, but the structure made me lost at some points.
Characterization: 4
-Characters were introduced and were developed.
Development:
Ideas: 4
-The central idea of the story was there and it was applied throughout the story.
Organization:
Designing Organization: 3
-The format of the essay was good, but the way the story progressed made it jumbled up in a way.
Specific Assignment Directions: 5
-Followed the directions well.
Language Use:
Description: 5
-Described the characters' thoughts very well.
Word Choice: 4
-The word choice was great.
Sentence Variety: 4
-Sentences were good, but it just seemed like time elapsed fast every sentence.
Voice/Sense of Audience: 4
-The dialogue was sort of there.
Conventions:
Grammar/Punctuation: 4
-The were some mistakes when it came to the grammar.
Spelling and Word Usage: 5
- The spelling and word usage fit well with the story.
Overall Assignment Presentation: 4
-Followed proper MLA format
TOTAL SCORE: 49
Assessment
-The best aspect of your essay are the detail thoughts of the characters.
-One aspect that may require further revision would be the way the ideas were structured.
The grade I would give this assignment is: B
Creative Writing Evaluation
Name of Whose Work You Are Working On: Carla Ventura
Evaluator: Cristian Barrera
Meaning/Content:
Story Structure: 5
-The structure of the story was great, and it flowed very well.
Characterization: 5
-Characters were well developed in the form of a dialogue between each other.
Development:
Ideas: 5
-The idea was established within the first paragraph of the story.
Organization:
Designing Organization: 5
-This essay is structured in an organized manner. Paragraphs weren’t too long.
Specific Assignment Directions: 4
-I think the story described three characters instead of four.
Language Use:
Description: 3
- Could have went into more depth with the other two characters' thoughts
Word Choice: 5
-The word choice was great.
Sentence Variety: 5
-Sentences were structured right.
Voice/Sense of Audience: 5
-The dialogue wasn't confusing at all.
Conventions:
Grammar/Punctuation: 5
-The grammar was right.
Spelling and Word Usage: 5
-From what I read all words were spelled correctly.
Overall Assignment Presentation: 5
-Followed proper MLA format
TOTAL SCORE: 53
Assessment
-The best aspect of the essay was just the central idea behind it. I was very into the story.
-One aspect that may require further revision would be putting other characters' ideas and thoughts into perspective.
The grade I would give this assignment is: A
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