Cristian Barrera's Peer Reviews

Cristian Barrera"s Peer Review

Name of Whose Work You Are Working On: Julia Yi

 Evaluator: Cristian Barrera

Meaning/Content: 

Story Structure: 4

-The structure of the story had a nice flow to it after I understood the situation in which they were talking in.

Characterization: 4

-Introduced most of the characters in a clear manner.

Development: 

Ideas: 5

- Established the main ideas from the beginning of the story.

Organization:  

Designing Organization: 4

-The structure of the essay was good, but I was sort of lost because of the way the characters we're talking.

Specific Assignment Directions: 5

-Followed the directions well.

Language Use: 

Description: 4

- The dialogue was written well and established the main ideas.

Word Choice: 5

-The word choice fit well with the story.

Sentence Variety: 4

-The sentence structure was good, sometimes difficult to grasp.

Voice/Sense of Audience: 5

-Having all of those characters interact with each other made the story flow well. 

Conventions: 

Grammar/Punctuation: 4

-There were some mistakes, but overall it was great 

Spelling and Word Usage: 5

-The word usage was a little graphic, but I understand it was part of the story.

Overall Assignment Presentation: 5

-Follow the MLA style and directions well.

TOTAL SCORE:  54

Assessment

-The best aspect of the story is the way it was just a conversation. It made it flow well, and I was really into the story.

-One aspect to work on is just giving a little bit more detail of what is going on in the story.

The grade I would give this assignment is: A

Name of Whose Work You Are Working On: Emily Cordova

Evaluator: Cristian Barrera

Meaning/Content: 

Story Structure: 3

-The plot of the story was there, but the structure made me lost at some points.

Characterization: 4

-Characters were introduced and were developed.

Development: 

Ideas: 4

-The central idea of the story was there and it was applied throughout the story.

Organization:  

Designing Organization: 3

-The format of the essay was good, but the way the story progressed made it jumbled up in a way.

Specific Assignment Directions: 5

-Followed the directions well.

Language Use: 

Description: 5

-Described the characters' thoughts very well. 

Word Choice: 4

-The word choice was great.

Sentence Variety: 4

-Sentences were good, but it just seemed like time elapsed fast every sentence.

Voice/Sense of Audience: 4

-The dialogue was sort of there. 

Conventions: 

Grammar/Punctuation: 4

-The were some mistakes when it came to the grammar.

Spelling and Word Usage: 5

- The spelling and word usage fit well with the story.

Overall Assignment Presentation: 4

-Followed proper MLA format

TOTAL SCORE:  49

Assessment

-The best aspect of your essay are the detail thoughts of the characters.

-One aspect that may require further revision would be the way the ideas were structured.

The grade I would give this assignment is: B

Creative Writing Evaluation

Name of Whose Work You Are Working On: Carla Ventura

Evaluator: Cristian Barrera

Meaning/Content:

Story Structure: 5

-The structure of the story was great, and it flowed very well.

Characterization: 5

-Characters were well developed in the form of a dialogue between each other. 

Development: 

Ideas: 5

-The idea was established within the first paragraph of the story. 

Organization:  

Designing Organization: 5

-This essay is structured in an organized manner.  Paragraphs weren’t too long.

Specific Assignment Directions: 4

-I think the story described three characters instead of four.

Language Use: 

Description: 3

- Could have went into more depth with the other two characters' thoughts

Word Choice: 5

-The word choice was great.

Sentence Variety: 5

-Sentences were structured right.

Voice/Sense of Audience: 5

-The dialogue wasn't confusing at all. 

Conventions: 

Grammar/Punctuation: 5

-The grammar was right.

Spelling and Word Usage: 5

-From what I read all words were spelled correctly.

Overall Assignment Presentation: 5

-Followed proper MLA format

TOTAL SCORE:  53

Assessment

-The best aspect of the essay was just the central idea behind it. I was very into the story.

-One aspect that may require further revision would be putting other characters' ideas and thoughts into perspective.

The grade I would give this assignment is: A