LA 10 journals

8/28/17

There needs to be a good topic like dragonsome take down the king. You also need to have elaboration to make the story more intriguing to viewersee like the dragon have 8 feet clawand the jaw is as a train and blood was leaking  between his teeth. You would also wanthe to aedit big climax to have the readers on there feet. Like dragon eats the warrior and the king is gonna have to fight he is slashing and gits hit by his best friend.