Peer Review Rashomon

Erin Griley:

Story Structure: 5

Characterization: 3 – Needs more dialogue

Ideas: 5

Designing Organization: 5

Specific Assignment Directions: 5

Description: 4

Word Choice: 5

Sentence Variety: 5

Voice/ Sense of Audience:  5

Grammar/ Punctuation: 5

Spelling and Word Usage: 5

Overall assignment presentation: 5

Score: 57/60

Best Aspect: The structure of your story was great and flowed smoothly.

Revise: Just include more detail of your dad and brother.

Grade: A-

Megan Ho:

Story Structure: 5

Characterization: 5

Ideas: 5

Designing Organization: 5

Specific Assignment Directions: 5

Description: 5

Word Choice: 5

Sentence Variety: 5

Voice/ Sense of Audience:  5

Grammar/ Punctuation: 5

Spelling and Word Usage: 5

Overall assignment presentation: 5

Best Aspect: It was easy to identify the different perspective.

Revise: Include more dialogue but everything else was great.

Grade: A

Jerralyn Satro:

Story Structure: 1 There needs to be characters with different perspectives.

Characterization: 3

Ideas: 5

Designing Organization: 5

Specific Assignment Directions: 1 Needs to be a story

Description: 4

Word Choice: 5

Sentence Variety: 5

Voice/ Sense of Audience: 5 

Grammar/ Punctuation: 5

Spelling and Word Usage: 5

Overall assignment presentation:  4

Score: 48/60

Best Aspect: Your points are clearly made.

Revise: Just need to follow the assignment and create a story with 4 different perspectives.

Grade: C-

Lisa Adams 

Story Structure: 5

Characterization: 4

Ideas: 5

Designing Organization: 5

Specific Assignment Directions: 4

Description: 5

Word Choice: 4

Sentence Variety: 4

Voice/ Sense of Audience: 4 

Grammar/ Punctuation: 5

Spelling and Word Usage: 5 

Overall assignment presentation: 5 

Score: 55/60

Best Aspect: The story structure flows smoothly. 

Revision: Improve the perspectives of the other characters.

The grade I would give this assignment is: A-