perspective story peer review

Paige :

Story Structure – 4 establishes strong plot, everything was described in a very good detailed manner. Could have put more dialogue into the story.

Characterization – 5 described the character very well from their feelings and what is each of the character’s personalities. Everything is clear.

Ideas -4 develop ideas clearly use relevant details

Designing Organization -5 I could really understand when the next character has to come in. it was very well organized.

Specific Assignment Directions- 4 exceeds all the requirement but was not in MLA format

Description – 5 it was very descriptive and detail.

Word Choice – 5 very well word choice

Sentence Variety – 4 good sentences and variety

Voice/Sense of Audience – 4 evident awareness of voice and audience

Grammar/ Punctuation - 5

Spelling and Word Usage -5

Overall assignment presentation -4

Assessment – The story was very interesting and it was very detailed. I could really relate to the situation by just reading the story. It would be nice to put more dialogue into the story.

GRADE : A

Kayla:

Story Structure – 3 some elements of story structure, it’s kinda hard to understand some parts of the story.

Characterization – 3 some character development

Ideas – 3 develops ideas briefly, could use more detail

Designing Organization – 3 could mention who is on which section, like I could not really understand what is going on

Specific Assignment Directions 5

Description – 4 good concept, but could revise it make it more neat I guess?

Word Choice - 5

Sentence Variety -5

Voice/Sense of Audience -4

Grammar/ Punctuation -4

Spelling and Word Usage -5

Overall assignment presentation-5

Assesment- it is kind of confusing on the characterization and structure. I got the concept but the story is just hard to understand.

GRADE: B

Iaan:

Story Structure – 4 establishes clear plot/ setting and character

Characterization  -4 develop characters clearly

Ideas -5 develop ideas fully and uses a wide range of relevant details

Designing Organization -5 maintains a clear focus

Specific Assignment Directions -5 exceeds all requirements specified for this assignment

Description -4 uses concrete language and sensory detail

Word Choice -5

Sentence Variety -5

Voice/Sense of Audience -5

Grammar/ Punctuation - 5

Spelling and Word Usage -5

Overall assignment presentation-5

Assessment: I think that this story has a very interesting concept and maybe put more detail characterization into it.

GRADE: A

Amy

Story Structure – 4 establishes strong plot, there are clear dialogue going on the story

Characterization - 4 good characterizations. I understand what and how you want the character to be like.

Ideas -4 develops ideas clearly, using relevant details

Designing Organization -5 it was very well organize and I understand most of it well

Specific Assignment Directions -5 followed the directions perfectly

Description -4 clear and detailed description used

Word Choice -5

Sentence Variety -5

Voice/Sense of Audience -5

Grammar/ Punctuation -5

Spelling and Word Usage -5

Overall assignment presentation-5

Assesment: I really like how you described your character and it would be awesome if you add more backgrounds about the character.

GRADE :A