Style in To Kill a Mockingbird
Narrative Elements in To Kill a Mockingbird: Style
To Kill a Mockingbird is written in modern American English, and the style is basically
informal, since the narrator is a child. The author, however, does
not try to keep within the limits of a child's vocabulary or powers
of expression. A wide range of language is used in the novel, and
in studying it the first step should be to identify the various
levels of style used. This is easy, since the variations in language
correspond to the divisions in social class. The African-American
dialect differs from the white; the rich whites speak more grammatically
than the poor whites; highly educated characters like Atticus and
his brother Jack speak more elegantly than town officials like Heck
Tate.
After listing the varieties of language to be found
in the novel you should analyse the author's purpose in using them.
First, differences in social class and educational status are revealed
by differing use of language. Secondly, individual character is
often revealed by distinctive style of speech (as in the cases of
Atticus and Bob Ewell). Thirdly, attitudes to moral issues can often
be detected by analysis of language, even when the characters speaking
belong to the same social class and might therefore be expected
to use identical words. You could, for instance, check the terms
used by different rich white individuals to refer to the African-American
- some say "nigger", some say "darky", some
say "Negro", some say "coloured persons" - and
take the word they choose as an indication of their racial attitude.
A minor example of the same type of variation in usage is to be
found in the name used by various characters for the narrator. Friends
call her Scout; enemies call her Jean Louise.
One further function of the language used in this
novel is the creation of atmosphere. All the characters, even the
highly educated Atticus, use distinctive Southern dialect expressions
such as "You all". Many names used for local fruits and
vegetables are also distinctively Southern. It is hard for foreign
students to appreciate this technique, but its effect is to create
a vivid sense of the Southern environment.
Another aspect of the novel is the humour which
abounds in many forms. There is the warm, tender humour of Dill
and Scout discussing the origin of babies; there is the satire which
mocks ignorance and prejudice; there is the irony of much of the
trial scene. In the end, the humorous tone lessens the final horror
of the Tom Robinson incident and we tend to remember the novel for
its masterful strokes of humour.
Activities Tasks
1
Most of Harper Lee's language is
coloured by Southern colloquialisms. Find examples and
explain how they contribute to the realism of the novel.
2
Various characters exhibit styles
of speech appropriate to their character. Find examples
to illustrate each of the following:(a) Atticus uses abstract legal terms, as well
as familiar colloquialisms when speaking to his children (b) Scout uses a racy slang which is sharply different
from the chatter of Miss Merriweather or the slow slur
of Burris Ewell.
3
Another stylistic talent which Lee
possesses is that of creating atmosphere. For example,
the Radley house soon becomes a mysterious place. Any
of the episodes in which the children are involved at
night become mysterious and effective by the use of highly
evocative language. Find examples and explain how Lee
evokes atmosphere and mood through her use of language.
4
(a) Cite examples of humour
- through Lee's descriptions, characterisations and dialogue.
Why did you find these humorous?(b) In what ways does the use of humour provide
a contrast to the serious issues explored in the novel?
5
Read pages 224 - 227 where Atticus
speaks to the jury during Tom Robinson's court case.(a) Write down examples of emotive words Atticus
uses in his speech.(b) Why does he use these emotive words?
6
We often use persuasive language
to convince others to behave in certain ways.(a) Find an example when Atticus persuades the
children to behave in a certain way. Explain why you think
it is persuasive.(b) Find an example when the children try to persuade
Atticus or Calpurnia to do something. Explain why you
think it is persuasive.(c) Of the two examples, who is the most persuasive
and why?
7
Skim through the novel to find ten
similes and ten metaphors. Create a table with two columns;
write all the similes and metaphors in one and in the
other list the effect they have on the reader.
8
Choose five characters from the novel
and write a simile and a metaphor describing each of them
(for example - simile: Atticus is as noble as a lion.
Metaphor: Atticus is a rock).
9
Show how language is used to indicate
character in the novel.
10
How are varieties of social status
indicated by speech in To Kill a Mockingbird?
An aphorism is a short pithy statement or saying, which expresses
an opinion or something generally believed to be true.
Examples from To Kill a Mockingbird include Aunt
Alexandrds aphorisms: "No Crawford minds his own
business" and "All the Bufords walk like that"
(p. 145).
Atticus tells Scout that "You never really understand
a person until you consider things from his point of
view ... until you climb into his skin and walk around
in it" (p. 33). Aphorisms are used in dialogue
when people want to give advice, point out a mistake
or explain something about human nature. Lee uses a
lot of aphorisms in To Kill a Mockingbird to
convey ideas about character, setting and relationships
within dialogue. We quickly figure out what kind of
person Aunt Alexandra is through her frequent use of
aphorisms!
11
Create a database of aphorisms from To Kill a Mockingbird. Create a table of four columns
and in the first column, write out all the aphorisms you
can find; in the second column, write the page number
on which you find each one; in the third column, the character
who speaks each aphorism and in the fourth column, the
situation in which it is spoken.Aphorisms
Page
Speaker
Situation
12
In a 1964 interview, Harper Lee said about
the craft of writing that "There's no substitute
for the love of language, for the beauty of an English
sentence. There's no substitute for struggling, if a struggle
is needed, to make an English sentence as beautiful as
it should be." Pick out paragraphs or passages in To Kill a Mockingbird that seem especially beautiful.
Write a paper exploring what it is that makes these passages
so appealing. How would you describe Lee's style? Why
is it so well-suited to the story she is telling?